Comfort Without Shortcuts

March 3, 2013
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There is an abruptness to it, the way they say your name when it’s a new friendship or when it’s all business. It can come off deliberately but masquerades as casual, as if to say “Hey name, it’s no big deal but…”

Sometimes it’s said in that way that we’re wired to hear with some apprehension, as though it’s something they want from us or some bit of bad news we could do without. Our arches hurt from standing on our toes, creeping carefully. To play the game well we say their name back with the same swirl of trepidation wrapped in formality.

Jess C. Scott says it’s different when someone loves you. “You know that your name is safe in their mouth.” It hangs in the air in a slightly different tonality, promising a little something and assuring everything.

The words grip as they offer, saying I know you and I love you just as they say I’m not afraid despite all the ways you could hurt me. This person loves you in spite of your flaws and dark moments of shame, and this person will keep your secrets. There is a silent understanding, little solemn oaths with each repetition. This efficiency of sentiment is forged in years of beautiful coexistence, one for which there are no shortcuts.

Week 12 of the Just Write prompts series by Rebecca Dickson and Laura Howard.
Just Write Creative Prompts - Rebecca T Dickson & Laura Howard
Jess C. Scott’s quotation comes from the book The Intern.

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6 Responses to Comfort Without Shortcuts

  1. Marty Watkins on March 3, 2013 at 5:23 pm

    It always amazes me how you pick up on things, notice things. They way you think and especially the way you see things, people and the world.
    I still think you should write a book someday.

    • Brian Watkins on March 3, 2013 at 10:21 pm

      Thanks! Yeah sometimes I get hung up in details, but it’s great for word-spinning. :-)

  2. Lynda, aka Lady Quixote on March 4, 2013 at 2:14 pm

    Very deep. Made me think. I like it.

    • Brian Watkins on March 5, 2013 at 12:32 pm

      Thanks, Lynda! It’s always a fun surprise to see where Rebecca’s prompts take the mind. :-)

  3. Karen Winters on March 4, 2013 at 5:28 pm

    Nice article Brian! I agree with your dad, you should write a book about all these things you’ve learned by watching people and habits. :)

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